When I was reading your post I really feel scared for a second there. Thank you for the reply, I'm just happy that you're not joining in on the contest. Or at least that's what you lead on. '-_-. Reading the excerpt now I've noticed a few grammatical errors and many unclear descriptions, and a few more points to add. I'll be finishing the draft within the week, and error proofing/optimizing will be complete within the following 3 days.

Then the epic zombie rpg, shooter, puzzle, action, adventure, drama, horror, parody, comedy, story. With unlockable skills and plenty of XP points. Not to mention the RIVALRY, and LOVE!