Originally Posted by Inspector Jones
Hi
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Hey
I also intend to write a novel, haha, I've got like 35,000 words so far. I post it
here as I write more
Good to see another teenager with the ambition to write something good (I'm 16).
The introduction is great. Only one thing I'd suggest: Don't start a story with a direct description of the weather. It works well in this story because of the description of the environment that follows. I'm just saying, don't get into the habit of using the weather as a starting point.
Great start though, love to see more.
Originally Posted by Leroy
Nice.
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The simplicity of your responses is astounding Leroy
