Greetings, zombified and survivors alike!

**Campor** · February 27th, 2008, 04:08 PM

I am Campor.

...More? Damn, you ask for a lot.

I enjoy writing, and I love zombies. Hence, they go hand-in-hand. Especially in this place.

I actually found this place from the official L4D forums about a Zombie Fiction writing contest, and I was like, 'Sounds interesting.'

So I registered, and I like the place. ^_^

So yeah, I wrote a fiction for the competition, and I'd love feedback on it- What I could improve, what did well, the like.

I know I don't describe much- That's one of my weak points. I either describe almost nothing, or go into way too much detail.

But yeah- Glad to be here, and I hope L4D comes out soon... But then, doesn't everyone?

Come out sooner, Left 4 Dead! Grr.

**Leroy** · February 27th, 2008, 09:52 PM

Welcome to the forums and don't forget to join our steamgroup.

MyNameDidntFit · February 28th, 2008, 03:18 AM

Originally Posted by Campor

I enjoy writing, and I love zombies. Hence, they go hand-in-hand. Especially in this place.

Me too! <3 LoL

Originally Posted by Campor

I know I don't describe much- That's one of my weak points. I either describe almost nothing, or go into way too much detail.

Don't worry about it too much. You'll find that it depends on how you're writing. I know I've read many stories (and novels) that have had barely any description but are still brilliant. Same goes for ones with so much description they describe scenes for several pages.

My tip: Just go with the flow.
When I write I sit down. I think for a little bit then I just write whatever comes to me. I find I get a lot better results that way then if I try to plan it out and put too much thought into it.
Another thing is to write it out like I said just going with the flow, then read it through a few times and then rewrite it (no, I don't mean edit it. I mean rewrite it, not looking at what you've already written).
I get some great passages doing that.

Anyway, I'll shut up now

If you want to see some of my writing then click here.

Oops, almost forgot to say hi.
Hi and welcome!

AzH · February 28th, 2008, 06:26 PM

Grrr-eatings, Campor. Welcome to our little slice of Left 4 dead pie. I hope you enjoy it. If you do, be sure to tell your buddies to sign up too. The more the merrier, I'm sure you'll agree!

MyNameDidntFit · February 29th, 2008, 07:28 AM

Originally Posted by DT

The more the merrier

Unless you're talking about zombies or Velociraptors ... Then you really want less of them after you.

**Reginald Assblaine** · February 29th, 2008, 10:37 PM

Originally Posted by MyNameDidntFit

Unless you're talking about zombies or Velociraptors ... Then you really want less of them after you.

Not if you have a zombie/velociraptor fetish *ahem*.

MyNameDidntFit · March 1st, 2008, 11:54 AM

Hey! I do not have a fetish for zombies and/or velociraptors!

I'm just kinda obsessed...

>.>
<.<
>.>

**Leroy** · March 1st, 2008, 02:34 PM

Said it in your profile. Actually you have a fetish for zombies.

MyNameDidntFit · March 1st, 2008, 02:41 PM

It says obsessed!

Fetish implies... Unnatural desires...

**ILikeToPinch** · March 1st, 2008, 09:46 PM

Welcome!

February 27th, 2008, 04:08 PM	#1 (permalink)
Campor L4D Forums Member Join Date: Feb 08 Posts: 42	Greetings, zombified and survivors alike! I am Campor. ...More? Damn, you ask for a lot. I enjoy writing, and I love zombies. Hence, they go hand-in-hand. Especially in this place. I actually found this place from the official L4D forums about a Zombie Fiction writing contest, and I was like, 'Sounds interesting.' So I registered, and I like the place. ^_^ So yeah, I wrote a fiction for the competition, and I'd love feedback on it- What I could improve, what did well, the like. I know I don't describe much- That's one of my weak points. I either describe almost nothing, or go into way too much detail. But yeah- Glad to be here, and I hope L4D comes out soon... But then, doesn't everyone? Come out sooner, Left 4 Dead! Grr.
Campor L4D Forums Member Join Date: Feb 08 Posts: 42

March 1st, 2008, 11:54 AM	#7 (permalink)
MyNameDidntFit That other red guy Join Date: Jan 08 Location: Australia National Flag: Steam ID: corey174 Posts: 2,389	Hey! I do not have a fetish for zombies and/or velociraptors! I'm just kinda obsessed... >.> <.< >.>
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March 1st, 2008, 02:41 PM	#9 (permalink)
MyNameDidntFit That other red guy Join Date: Jan 08 Location: Australia National Flag: Steam ID: corey174 Posts: 2,389	It says obsessed! Fetish implies... Unnatural desires...
	Veiled Duality

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February 27th, 2008, 09:52 PM	#2 (permalink)
Leroy L4D Reg Join Date: Jan 08 Location: U.S. Posts: 1,833	Welcome to the forums and don't forget to join our steamgroup.

February 28th, 2008, 06:26 PM	#4 (permalink)
AzH ....what? Join Date: Jan 08 Location: Great Britain National Flag: Steam ID: AzH4Dead Posts: 2,411	Grrr-eatings, Campor. Welcome to our little slice of Left 4 dead pie. I hope you enjoy it. If you do, be sure to tell your buddies to sign up too. The more the merrier, I'm sure you'll agree!

March 1st, 2008, 02:34 PM	#8 (permalink)
Leroy L4D Reg Join Date: Jan 08 Location: U.S. Posts: 1,833	Said it in your profile. Actually you have a fetish for zombies.

March 1st, 2008, 09:46 PM	#10 (permalink)
ILikeToPinch L4D Forums Member Join Date: Feb 08 Posts: 8	Welcome!