Very NICE!

I thought this was a unique story.

There were some big words lol..i didnt understand most of those words *young*

But that was a good story. Very descriptive.

First story....I hate you lol j/p

Congrats on that

Looks like we are the only 2 so far that have finished...mine is far different than urs...I started about 2 minutes after I had read the Contest thread, but was grounded lol....sucks

Once again..good job and good luck!